This Kibbitzer is based on a suggested correction to the dissertation of a Farsi-speaking student of Economics:

Original	Revision
The variation of these ratios presents some insight about the financial intermediary role of banks.	The variation of these ratios offers some insight into the role of banks as financial intermediaries.

What attracted attention in the original was the slight oddity of the collocation present + insight(s). We could find no example of this collocation in my data, while there were several examples of offer + insight(s) (with incidentally, the preposition into):

 1 Scott-type inquiry is a mouthwatering one, offering an insight into the detailed workings of
 2 ts own accord." Mr Aleksashenko's analysis offers an insight into the mess of Russia's day-to
 3 ersome fielding. Illingworth was unable to offer any insight into what other criteria short o
 4 ve Coogan, can make his creation last will offer fascinating insights into the pain-threshold
 5 his vital and energetic performance, which offered fresh insights and perspectives in every m
 6 its yolk and white, the rotation of nuclei offers insights into their fluid properties. When n
 7 ard Williams nor the staging of Tom Hawkes offered insights or any justification for the expe
 8 t the writing is there from the first page,offering insights into Mammon . . . a la mode and
 9 pe was her inspiration. This retrospective offers new insight into an artist often overshadow
10 ry of the crumbling Maitland. But the show offers no insight into the reasons behind Barrymor
11 es had been lost all those years but which offered no insights into why native North American
12 ve to say it's probably my mother.' Having offered the insight he has little to add by way of
13  of specialisms on their own terms, and to offer them insights from other fields of knowledge
14 There is little sense that rationality can offer us insight and progress into all sorts of thi
15 tions for which there is no need. The book offers useful insights and will interest educators

16 tions, record findings, interpret data and present findings for different audiences and purpo
17 pported the method used by the Guardian to present findings, but doubted whether this should
18 they can swop problems," said Dr Kahn, who presented his findings to the Scottish branch of t
19 t immunity certificates. This inquiry will present its findings later this year. Ministers de
20 s health by Global Sports Marketing, which presented its findings to clubs at Wigan two weeks
21 titute  responsible for organising it will present its findings at a conference in Tokyo in e
22 were in work. The campaign group, which is presenting its findings at a conference today in N
23 asury's Economic Secretary, is also due to present the findings of a review into small compan
24 wed as exceptional," said Fiona Smith, who presented the findings to the Institute of British
25 sity of Michigan geo-chemistry student who presented the findings to the annual meeting of t
26  that Dr Sutcliffe and other experts would present their findings next month on ways of makin
27 ection group SOS Mata Atlantica. The group presented the findings of a five-year survey of fo