Kibbitzer 26 | In Fact |
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1. Man is very different from other animals. Due to his greater mental powers and his capacity for language, man can learn more. In fact, most sociologists stress the regularity of man's behaviour, the repetition of certain socially relevant actions, and the resulting orderliness and calculability of social life which follow from this. | Man is very different from other animals. Due to his greater mental powers and his capacity for language, man can learn more. Most sociologists stress the regularity of man's behaviour, the repetition of certain socially relevant actions, and the resulting orderliness and calculability of social life which follow from this. |
2. ... men interact between each other and the environment. To ensure that their communication is meaningful, they use particular symbols and language. In fact, language becomes an important tool for human beings to interact and give meaning to their lives. Through language man can settle disputes ... | ... men interact with each other and with the environment. To ensure that their communication is meaningful, they use particular symbols and language. Language has become an important tool allowing human beings to interact and give meaning to their lives. Through language man can settle disputes ... |
3. Culture is what we inherit through being members of a particular society or group. In fact, the nature of human everyday life is a process of interacting and communicating. |
Culture is what we inherit through being members of a particular society or group. The nature of everyday human life is that it is a process of interaction and communication. |
A problem for many of our students whose written English is in other respects excellent is that they tend to overuse and/or misuse Logical Connectives such as in fact. During the consultation we decided to check the use of in fact from the concordancer and found that the usual use appeared to be in contexts where fact is contrasted with supposition:
27th October 1997 | Consultant: Tim Johns |
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