Kibbitzer 32 | Academic Modesty |
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In conclusion, this study is a useful first step in the development of biodegradation techniques. | In conclusion, it is hoped that this study may be a useful contribution to the development of biodegradation techniques. |
Two principles of Academic Modesty are broken by the original drafting:
18th January 1998 | Consultant: Tim Johns |
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