This Kibbitzer is based on a dissertation by a Farsi-speaking postgraduate
student of Civil Engineering:
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Revision |
The purpose of this group of tests was to investigate the engineering
behaviour of calcareous soil and to prove that this soil is not
suitable for reuse in road construction |
The purpose of this group of tests was to investigate the engineering
behaviour of calcareous soil and to establish whether this soil is
suitable for reuse in road construction |
The first problem here is the use of the word prove. In science, a mathematician
may prove a theorem:
- Often, the best way to prove a mathematical theorem is to
start at both ends, and try to meet in the middle.
However, the conclusions of science and engineering cannot usually be proved in the way
in which a mathematician can prove that 1 + 1 = 2. For that reason, prove is often
negative in referring to science tests:
- That both the CO2 and global temperature data have positive slopes does
not prove that the two series are related.
- The stability of xyl+ recombinants from mut+ and mutU crosses does
not prove that gene replacement occurs ...
- Immunofluorescence and mechanical studies indicate, but do not prove,
that a myosin-dependent cytoskeletal contraction drives capping.
- While the authors cannot prove that the cases who participated
in this study were representative of all cases with with respect of chilli pepper
consumption, a bias would have to be very strong to explain the association observed.
The second, and more serious problem with the original text is that it misrepresents
the place of the experiment in scientific research. Tests are carried out not to show
that something is true (i.e. the result is known in advance of the test) but to find
out whether something is true (i.e. the result is not known in advance). In
discussing this, we hit upon the verb establish which is slightly more formal than
'find out', and found citations such as the following for establish whether::
- Tests are under way to establish whether the meat is from
illegally slaughtered whales.
- Geologists use a range of evidence to establish whether a star
is faint enough to be a brown dwarf.
- This is important in establishing whether a star is faint
enough to be a brown dwarf.
- The immediate issue is to establish whether ME is a medical
condition that entitles people to benefits associated with illness.
- Labour is committed to proportional representation for European elections, once a
referendum has established whether the electorate wants this
system for the House of Commons.
Another verb which would have fitted equally well in this context is determine,
as shown by the following citations for determine whether:
- We conducted a survey to determine whether an education
programme could change traditional practices and whether any change is sustained.
- Further investigations are required to determine whether the
transformation of this sensory information to final motor commands takes place at the
level of the paralemniscal zone.
- To determine whether T cells from the INS-I-E mice were
clonally paralysed, we attempted to activate the I-E-specific T cells by receptor
crossleasing.
- The therapist must determine whether the patient feels able,
with support, to tackle his present difficulties ...
- The aim of the audit was to determine whether children with
indications for neonatal BCG immunization had received the vaccine before attendance at
routine six-week postnatal examination.
3rd June 1999 |
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