This Kibbitzer is based on a point that appeared twice within a morning's
consultations, in the work of two students with similar language backgrounds, but very
different fields of study. The first is a Turkish-speaking civil engineer from Tabriz in
Iran, who has to use to use Farsi for all his professional work:
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The existence of chlorite mineral (1 - 8%) may
explain this behaviour. |
The presence of chlorite mineral (1 - 8%) may
explain this behaviour. |
The second student is researching Medieval Islamic Philosophy. His first language is
also Turkish.
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They argue that in the existence of all
determinants, namely full power, definite will, proper time and conditions, and the
disappearance of all hindrances, the act necessarily occurs. |
They argue that in the presence of all
determinants, namely full power, definite will, proper time and conditions, and the
removal of all hindrances, the act necessarily occurs. |
The central point here is that in these students' second languages of academic
study (Farsi and Arabic respectively) the standard translation for both presence
and existence is vujud. This helps to explain the
difficulty they had in distinguishing between these two words in English, in which existence
is the general term ("Philosophers argue about the existence of God') and presence
is the local term ("When he prayed he believed that he was in the presence of
God"). The following sentence citations illustrate the difference between the two
terms:
- Michel Dutang, began looking for alternatives to chlorine after studies linked its presence in drinking water to cancer.
- Looking at the question from an economic standpoint, the key justification for a
continued British presence in the Middle East was access to oil.
- Clement V (1305~14) went so far as to decree that even the presence
of Muslims on Christian soil amounted to "an insult to the Creator".
- Calculations seemed to show that it was difficult to explain how galaxies would form in
the presence of large numbers of neutrinos.
- The most striking feature of the frog retina is the presence
of "bug-detectors": that is, fibres in the optic nerve which are stimulated by
small dark moving objects on the retina.
- The individual organism is something whose existence most
biologists take for granted.
- Gary Goldstein, one of Dalitz's collaborators, says he is "quite confident"
that they have discovered the existence and the mass of the
quark.
- Moral pluralism asserts the existence of a multitude of
incompatible but morally valuable forms of life.
- This view holds that the cosmos has been generated and may be destroyed, and that men
similarly first came into existence at a definite time.
- Opposing pressure groups were already in existence and
preparing for the campaign: in favour, the Divorce Action Group; and against, such groups
as Family Solidarity, Women in the Home, and the Knights of Columbanus.
Here is a short test. What is the missing word in the following sentence citations?
- A few scientists had predicted the __________________ of black holes for more than 200
years, but most scientists did not take black holes seriously.
- Some people are more likely to develop these complications and can be identified by
demonstrating the __________________ of a particular tissue-type in their body make-up.
- This difference has not so far been accounted for, but could in part be attributable to
the __________________ of additional HeLa cell proteins in the complex.
- The rules of Equity are only a sort of supplement or appendix to the Common Law; they
assume its __________________ but they add something further.
- At present, inspectors can only detect the __________________ of harmful bacteria in
organic waste by taking a water sample back to the laboratory, separating out solid matter
containing microorganisms, and culturing it in a Petri dish.
- He guessed that the molecules were shaped like balls an unusual configuration
and set about gathering evidence. Five years passed until the __________________ of
these molecules, nicknamed buckyballs, was confirmed.
- In its 18 months of __________________, Classic FM's blend of music has gained a weekly
audience of 4.5 million.
- With those he attacks he shares the premise that all that we are directly aware of are
ideas, which have no __________________ apart from a perceiving mind.
- Just as the __________________ of salmon in Scottish rivers can be used as an indicator
of a waterway's health, butterflies signal the health of Madagascar's forests.
- Sussex police said that the __________________ of armed officers in the area was part of
their normal counter-terrorist patrols.
Check your answers
8th July 1999 |
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